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it is a 30 minute challenge me and my friends all did....i doubt it will make it passed if it does i will make a better version if not ill just drop it.
Short and not so sweet
Really....not so great, to put it mildly. The animation was...servicable, but the fighting itself was dull, cliched and over way to soon. And erm, frankly apalling music, which also didn't even get started 'til the film was over. Try making something longer next time, and don't just submit small things you did with friends that no-one else would have an interest in seeing.
Try harder next time
if this is your first flash i guess it's ok but dont submit movies
befor u get good at it.
and please when useing background music, use STREAM so we dont have to download the hole song.. shh... try looking for tutorials or something to help u geting better.
Its not right.
The fighting was good but you dident pay much attention on the affects, for instance, they were jumping around in like 3 seconds, and you couldent keep your eye on it, you should of made it like slow motion so we can see what actually happens to the apponent.
Again, there have been so many stick fights through the years. Some better than this, some worse. The music just seemed out of place, and I think if you concentrated more on smooth fighting instead of blur effects and the like this could have been much better. Still, for 30 minutes of work this wasn't too bad.
I wouldn't really want to say anything negative, but I couldn't find anything positive about this... I mean, there are so much better stick animations, so this didn't really stand out. But if it was really done in 30 minutes, the I quess it's okay...
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