Score: 6
"Interesting"
date: August 5, 2007
Interesting work. I can see you put a lot of effort into the flash.
A few tip for future work, the DBZ style, while very cool is more or less worn out at this point. I would recconed going for something a little more creative.
Also you might want to try assigning different colors to the characters powers. It was more than confusing at some points trying to discern who hitting who with what.
And just a minor pet peeve of mine...it looks like you have a lot of experience drawing characters faces (anime style) head on. They look great. Your profiles however could use some work.
Overall, interesting work.
August 6, 2007
Author's Response:
Yah, I guess you're right about the profiles.
As for different colors, I can't, since Iris' symbol color has always been red, and Loftur was not my original character.
There was too much I couldn't control this round.
