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Credits in the animation.
This one was even better then Round 1
interesting i guess, but im willing to bet these characters didnt, or wont win.
Decent attempt though.
Now what makes you think that?
As a matter of fact, this contest is still going on as of now, so who knows?
Interesting work. I can see you put a lot of effort into the flash.
A few tip for future work, the DBZ style, while very cool is more or less worn out at this point. I would recconed going for something a little more creative.
Also you might want to try assigning different colors to the characters powers. It was more than confusing at some points trying to discern who hitting who with what.
And just a minor pet peeve of mine...it looks like you have a lot of experience drawing characters faces (anime style) head on. They look great. Your profiles however could use some work.
Overall, interesting work.
Yah, I guess you're right about the profiles.
As for different colors, I can't, since Iris' symbol color has always been red, and Loftur was not my original character.
There was too much I couldn't control this round.
Needs voice actors and fighting sounds though in my opinion. But none the less I give it a 9 with a 5/5.
As I said, the voice acting is impossible, since Loftur is not my OC...
hmm, I guess in some ways its ok, but not realy
it didn't make much sence, but it was a good try. the sound was bad, try not to leave so many pauses. The fighting sequence was akward and wasn't very enjoyable. You should add more seens to make more sence, not to mention the dialog was hard to understand. you should make a better way of displaying text if you're not gonna use voices.
Good point about the text.
As for pauses, they're directional things, and I personally thought they kind of added to the feeling, but oh well, to each his own, right?
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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