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Space is boring so Red hangs with his chum Bluey, with wierd encounters.
that was nice keep up the good work!
Reminds me of On The Moon
Although it is less insane and a lot shorter, this is a quality piece of animation. I love the fact that Darth Vader was having brunch with a Stormtrooper just behind Red.
Now for something like this, you need to come up with plenty more episodes for us. How long did this one take you and therefore how many could you produce in a year? That way, people become more accustomed to it and generally would enjoy the cartoons more.
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But could be better, a lot better. You seem rather talented, and I enjoyed you're animating. The only thing lacking was more or less the story telling; rather vague, short, and I really couldn't follow anything. There's nothing wrong with random humor; which is what I think you where going for. There still needs to be more direction, it doesn't matter if it's serious or just a silly plot; you need to better lead people through the story.
A couple things to do would be: greater length, go into more detail, be it characters of surroundings. Oh and don't forget cause and effect; some your humor had a lot of effect and no cause. Just make sure to let us know what, or why so and so is happening...
P.s. I checked out you're other flash, and it wasn't half bad, so keep at it :3
Good selection of sounds, if I wasn't in the room I would've been fooled it was a movie or something. Little short, not much in the story. Could be a developed series.
Intresting i hope u make longer with in depth story line
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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