Score: 8
"Good humor"
date: August 1, 2007
Well, let's start with the graphics.
I think you could at least add some more details to the robot, especially
since it is the main character.
Although the graphics of the water, the girl, the crab and that Godzilla were
really nice.
The style is kind of almost unique, haven't seen it often and you can try
to improve your own style a bit.
The humor was, original and i found it actually funny humor, not too rude,
not too soft, good humor. :)
Maybe, like the others said you could add lip syncing to the movie, to make
it more realistic.
And you could have added soft beach music on a low volume, the music for the
scene where the robot got angry at the girl had perfect music, and the music
for the scenes between the beach scenes fitted quite well too.
You have potential, but you need only practice and we will see your movies
getting better automatically, one big advice, have fun in making movies and
theres nothing to worry about!
Thanks for using my music by the way. :D
Keep it up, and especially the humor.
4/5
August 2, 2007
Author's Response:
Thank you Astrono! The next episode should be more animated (especially the robot), it should be more cinematic actually. But for now I have to find The Question, and I began (slowly) to do a new "sad" movie.
Thanks for the review, I'm glad to see that you like this style, I like it too :P but it takes time!
PS: There's a beach musical background (with waves), but maybe it's too low :S
