Score: 6
"Very Creative"
date: July 31, 2007
This is a very good concept, and some aspects of it particularly well executed. Making the player actually use objects was a very nice touch, as was giving them points for seeking out information bubbles (heh, i'm reviewing this in the context of the point of the contest by the way). However, the game was held back in several respects. It was far too short really (unless i missed something), the actual platform engine wasn't very solid, and i know it seems cruel to complain about something that it would only take a small tweak to fix, but the slow-responding jumping really bugged me =/
If i were you, i'd take the days you have left and work on those three things. I imagine you have enough time to improve all of them at least a little bit... and then when you're done you could just update the file here. It wont benefit you on newgrounds, but it might win you some money in the contest =]
July 31, 2007
Author's Response:
thanks alot man this was a really valuable review. this engine i must admit has given me quite a bunch of problems, ill continue tweeking it. Thanks a ton for you input