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5 MINUTES AGO, IN A GALAXY RIGHT NEAR YOUR LOCAL 7-11....
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Not to Bad
Is this your first flash? It's really not all THAT bad, as I can see you did put at least more than an hour in this, which alot of people don't. To be a constructive critism this is what I'll tell you: Next time DO NOT make the voices squeaky. People hate that here, and I couldn't even understand what he was saying. Also, try not using completely solid colors on everything. Mix em' up! Good luck with future projects, I protected this entry, but only by a hair.
if you hate the squeaky voices, whatever, thats your opinion, some other people are fine with it as long as they can understand it, which is kind of hard to do with my sound recorder, because it cant do much, but I'm working on it. And no, this is not my first animation because this is ep. 3 (emphasis on 3) but it might seem like it because I am 13 and therefore, my motor skills aren't fully developed and just one more thing, sorry if I seemed like quite an asshole in this review, its just that I'm not in a very good mood today.
It was decent
You did a preety good job animating, character design could have been better. The big problem i had with this was that i think you just used your own voice altered in windows sound recorder, i recommend either looking for voice actors here or simply using the gold wave to enhance your voice better.
the gold wave? ummm i've never heard of it, if you happen to read this response could you please send me a more specific description in a PM and tell me where to get it? thx alot
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