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This is a story of jet pilots who lose their friend in battle. I worked hard on this. Music by Alice in Chains and Soundgarden. Feel free to review.
A great concept! Voice acting needs a little more acting in it, and you need to make be believe the aircraft are flying, i.e. elevators, ailerons, and rudders.
Sorry to let you know, but I didn't think it was of a very high quality. Both art and animation need to be stepped up, and when animating characters, please don't use the segmented limbs. You could also do with a little better voice acting. By the way, what was up with the black guy's voice. I know you worked hard, just try to step it up.
PS: Why is it that the brother always dies?
Damn I wish I thought of that
that was amazing asides from the graphics but 1 question: why did the black guy (no offence) die?
needd to redo
ok good but i would recomend and you might get front page make characters into stickmen and redoo voice acting and maby change the back ground to jungle oh and maby add fire from ground like antiaircraft bullets littering the skys oh and do some research and remake aircraft oh and on aircraft make the design look slick and redo the run way and thats about all and if you do take my advice and oimp everything out you migh just might get on front page but overall nice job. ; )
I can see you did work very hard on this :), looks like you put a lot of effort into it. The "camera angles" were also really good, well though out, animation was alright, the only thing I would improve on this are graphic quality (maybe add more gradients and shadows), but that comes easily with time in animating.
Keep it up :)
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A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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