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The Dogfight

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Jul 25, 2007 | 3:49 PM EDT

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This is a story of jet pilots who lose their friend in battle. I worked hard on this. Music by Alice in Chains and Soundgarden. Feel free to review.

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Chuck-ehChuck-eh

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Good work

A great concept! Voice acting needs a little more acting in it, and you need to make be believe the aircraft are flying, i.e. elevators, ailerons, and rudders.



JinumonJinumon

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Sorry buddy.

Ehhhh,
Sorry to let you know, but I didn't think it was of a very high quality. Both art and animation need to be stepped up, and when animating characters, please don't use the segmented limbs. You could also do with a little better voice acting. By the way, what was up with the black guy's voice. I know you worked hard, just try to step it up.
Jinumon
PS: Why is it that the brother always dies?



G00MG00M

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Damn I wish I thought of that

that was amazing asides from the graphics but 1 question: why did the black guy (no offence) die?



sam20fullersam20fuller

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

needd to redo

ok good but i would recomend and you might get front page make characters into stickmen and redoo voice acting and maby change the back ground to jungle oh and maby add fire from ground like antiaircraft bullets littering the skys oh and do some research and remake aircraft oh and on aircraft make the design look slick and redo the run way and thats about all and if you do take my advice and oimp everything out you migh just might get on front page but overall nice job. ; )



denebodenebo

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

I can see you did work very hard on this :), looks like you put a lot of effort into it. The "camera angles" were also really good, well though out, animation was alright, the only thing I would improve on this are graphic quality (maybe add more gradients and shadows), but that comes easily with time in animating.
Keep it up :)