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Ok I should tell you guys... This is my first flash movie EVER. So please, please be easy on me. I'll get better, Hopefully. Simple tale as told by evil Dynobon. lol...
I want to thank all you guys for your reviews, most were helpful.
I couldn't understand the audio, and ur animation needs to be a lot better, for a first time it wasn't bad, but u need to keep practicing and get a lot better
Nice try for a first Flash Movie...
First and foremost, the voice acting needs to be a hell of a lot better. I know you were trying to go for the 'deep, voice-over guy' effect, but in this case it was poorly done and could barely be understood.
Your drawing style is pretty good. My only problem is that you didn't use it effectively. What's the point of having decent drawings if you're not going to bring them to life? A little walking animation, a simple arm movement, anything would have been better than whole static images being moved across the screen with motion tweens.
For a first Flash Movie, it's ok. It definitely could use a lot of improvements.
It was too slow, and animations sucked. Better please, man.
I didn't hear at all what the narrator voice was saying, and it wasn't entertaining.
Good idea but I don't understand right the dialog.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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