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Just so Alysha can see how this is comeing.....blam it

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How much do you have to wait till he wakes up?I only saw when he woke up because of the clock,then he went back to sleep and nothing else?Is there something wrong with my computer or something I don`t know but I bet this is a nice movie>

A good moral but undeniably amiss of a few factors

A very good moral story that could change a few peoples lives and how they live them by them watching it. A little short (but I guess it does not need longevity to get it's point across) and maybe a little dull in places. Overall ,though, it was a good flash that is above the average.

Finish it up

For what it's at so far, it looks like it could display a nice moral image... which is something rare to see on newgrounds.

The visuals on this half were decent, but could use some working up, try invest into some more frame by frame animation.

For what it's at so far... it's quite nice.

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Its a good start ... i like how the flash is being made... 1 thing tho when it replays by its self it also keeps playing the song and then starts it again behind the one thats going ... u might kno that but i thought u might like to kno... keep it coming its good ...

Ask and ye shant receive

It's short and obviously not finished. All the same, you've got a really nice little piece here. You're doing well and I hope you continue it. Choice of music was good, the events so far are things we've ALL experienced...I look forward to seeing this when it's completed.

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3.06 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 18, 2007
9:45 PM EDT