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Try and spot the moral to the story! I made this a few years back but I'm new to newgrounds.
The animation was good, and it promoted a moral. i cannot give it a 5 only beacause its not my kind of thing, but regarding your flash skills and the clear voice of your voice actors, i would give your skills in themselves an 8/10. NG, as i have come to notice it, does not have short animations about a somewhat good moral which no one would care much about anyway, get too far with recognition. not sayng its not a good moral, im just stating the facts. more people would view it if it showed an extremely powerfully seen ideal. in the eyes of other voters, here is what they might see: some woman is nagging a judge about her bank probs. who cares? however if it were something along the lines of " the story of the widows family dying then living a life of poverty, before begging the judge for his pity and holding a case to help her life" it would get more views. it is not the message the people dont like, but its the perspective in which the story is told. in this story we see the judges side, which is just him being annoyed to death, but from the widows side, it may get more of a bang with you audience. unfortunatly, if the flash isnt an action or comedy, drama needs alot of punch to get far. kudos though
This is nice.
The animation is great, the sounds and voices are great... This submission in general is great. The moral of the story is "If you annoy the heck out of your neighbors, they'll do anything." 7/10 and 4/5.
What was that
The animation on that was fantastic. I not sure but i think the moral was... i have no clue at all at the moral of the story but i bet it was good.
That was really good. There wasn't a whole lot of animation but the nice graphics and the way you did animate what little there was made up for it.
Good story, and of course, moral.
Keep bible stuff out of it?
I found the style of animation impressive, but content was not entirely up to par.
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