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Try and spot the moral to the story! I made this a few years back but I'm new to newgrounds.
I do like a moral in a story... but a religious one? Meh... I'm probably being very close-minded about this, but referencing to the holy book in order to make a case doesn't sit well with me, I'd rather it was a moral without any literary backing, one granted by experience of life, or something. The animation in itself is great though, it'd be a good story just as it is, without the religious overtone. Keep it going!
you're posting parables lifted directly from the bible and people complain about the "slight religious overtones"? It's like watching Focus on the Family and complaining about religious overtones.
Can ya make it a little longer? Just to show more of the story, perhaps with a happy or sad ending, just so we see what the persistence leads up to. Only thing I did not really care for were the slight religious overtones, but hey, that is just me, other than that it is good, just as I said, could be a bit longer and show an outcome.
Nicely done :)
I thought this one was great. Nice animation and pretty good voice acting. My only complaint would be the sound clips when the voices came on. but thats hard to avoid.
And for those of you who don't get the story, It does help to just go and read the bible verse that is presented at the beginning and end of the flash.
just makes it a bit clearer for those who were curious.
Nice, Good Biblical lesson.
Once again, solid animation, fantastic voice acting, and a great story capped off with a great moral. Loved it! After watching this piece I have now seen ALL of your work, and it has remained consistently entertaining, and beautifully crafted. Outstanding! I only wish to see more from you before you get big-and-famous off of this...Voted 5!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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