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A Simple Story

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My first flash submition. I'm still a noob in flash but i'm getting used to it... :D
I overused tweening and the music is kinda continous, but its okay...

A loner and a happy-go-lucky girl meets at some alley and talks a little.

Oh yeah.. part two is almost done... its a lot better than this, but I can't guarantee you will see it as awesome...

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shdgj

that girl is hot lol

Speed up your frames, buddy.

Animation was okay for a beginner, but your frame speed was way too slow. Getting to the title was around 30 seconds.
Review: 3/10
Vote: 1/5

Meh

It was just a bunch of shape tweens really. It was cute though. Try not to use shape tweens as transitions, especially when they're that obvious.

Ewww Peeew

It was a bit stinky but not bad for your firstie.
Just remember to wipe your bum properly when animating or else bad things WILL happen...
Peace out

Good

Nice... well O.K. Graphics but over-use of shape-tweening.
Could do with being a little longer though.

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Votes
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Score
2.59 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 15, 2007
7:03 AM EDT