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This is the first episode in a new sitcom following your average, middle aged heart and father as he just tries to make it through the day.
I prettied up all the graphics and sound. Now it looks like a fully finished episode. See it again for the first time.
he he. there werev some good jokes in there("I'll understand You!!!!")
the whole thing wasn't gold but i can be genorus ...so,ALL MY 5 R BELONG TO THIS!!!
i reviewed AND voted 5=you respond AND vote as helpful
Ah, if only everything that came out of me was gold, I wouldn't have to go to work. I'd just sell bricks of my gold shit. Although, that sounds pretty painful, so mebbe not.
Glad you liked it, thanks for watching!
Starting off, the graphics were ok, something could move in the backgrounds and stuff, some of the characters weren't much of complete (talking about boss and his 2 sons xd). The style... The style... Theres nothing much to say, just that its something I never seen on newgrounds. Next off are sounds, well in sounds theres just talking, no background music or anything, no sounds of people like working, typing, talking, I suggest trying to do that on the sequell. In violence theres the poor fight in the smoke (we dont even know what happend there or how did Fat get owned), and theres the scene showing what will happen next, basicly the violence is very poor. That submission is basicly about interactivity, so I'll grade it higher than average. And finally comes the humor, I cant grade it high because there wasn't much of the stuff that made me laugh, theres basicly the boss that is the funniest thing in the whole submission, leaving this field low. Overall, this flash is shitty to me, but other users may like it. Hope you do better on the sequell.
Let me respond to your points. It's a sitcom, background noise takes away from the dialogue and it's not necessary.
The style...yes, it's something you haven't seen on Newgrounds. I assume that's a compliment. In which case, thanks. Unless you mean you want to see another cartoon with clocks and/or stick figures? In which case, no thanks.
As for the fight scene, remember those warner brothers cartoons? Whenever two characters got in a fight it was just a ball of smoke with random arms and stuff poking out. That's what I was going for. As for how Fat got pwnd, well, he's a big dumb idiot. And Heart is filled with rage. That = pwnage.
As for the humor, well, humor's different with everybody. I'll make what I think is funny and some will agree, some won't. Obviously if everyone had my sense of humor then 'According to Jim' wouldn't have lasted for so long. Check your local listing. Actually, don't.
Anyway, I think I addressed everything. Overall, this flash is funny to me and others may think so.
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