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This is the first animation in Flash I make. Hope you enjoy it. Make sure you watch the entire thing and browse throughout the scene selection screen. Check parts 2 and 3 also.
sorry for the low scores but..
you said this was your first flash?
well it woudlve been better if you mad it longer and maybe put in a monster or to
and had him like order pizza over the walkie talkie or something..
Thanks for the review. Hope you like my next submission(s).
for a first time flash wow..
this actually amused me this set a new milestone for first flash movies it had a couple of things through out that the movie like the note and extra scene at the end of the movie this was pretty funny and i hope this makes it through the portal and if it doesnt ill be disappointed in the Ng
p.s. Mr.Potato Head is trademarked by hasbro
Thanks for the review. Hope you like my next submission(s)... oh, and thanks for the info on Mr. Potato Head.
Really good for a first time!
I almost can't believe this is your first flash movie! :D I love the part where he throws all the stuff from the heli. xD Here are a few things to look out for in this video:
1. Perhaps add some music from the audio portal?
2. The scene where Doomguy is shown walking like in an fps is a little bit longer than it needed to be.
3. Maybe add a few more details/props to your backgrounds.
If you take care of those, you'll be set! Be proud that this was your first!! ^^
Thank you for your comments.
I LOL'D '_^
For your first this is defiantly quite a good submission but there can be alot to improve, such as gfx, sound and ect.
Thank you for your comments. Make sure you watch part 2 too.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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