Well this was dramatic, alternatively sad and happy, all scenes with suitable music to fit the setting. There's really a lot of different melodies included! I like the way the movei plays naturally, but you can skip through the scenes faster if you read fast, that way it's like an interactive book. Pretty unique. The leg animations look a bit weird, like his legs are turning hollow when he lifts them up, but... apart from that, great work!

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"and so, shinji became a great musician, asuka and rei fell in love with him and they all lived happily ever after" hehehe. man that was a moving story, i love the animation. By the way u said u based this on a filipino story, i never heard of anything like this (i'm filipino too). what's the name of the story u based this on?

This made me... get the runs.

I was sitting here, with my white castle, and i was watching your cartoon. When i farted and it was a little moist. So i held it in real fast, u know when u fart and you are like "oh shit" and hold it in. So after a changed my underware ifigured it musta been you cartoon and all it's text. But nice job, it was good.

I didn't watch it until the end.

And do you know why?
The timings are completely missed: there are parts with lots of text that pass by in a flash and parts with a couple of words that keep showing in the scene. There are buttons but I don't want to rewind three or four scenes for a couple of words I missed.

I don't like movies in wich I have to press buttons to go on but the "automatic player" is even worst if it is badly timed. You have also to allow some time for the viewer to watch the scenes: most of the time I got my eyes running by the text without any hope to watch anything else.
I'm sorry I didn't watched the story, it looked promising. Keep it up, but have an eye in the timing!! :-)

worth watching

DUDE this was freaking awsome maybe u can find someone to narrate the voice keep the words i had alittle trouble looking at how well the pictures were drawn and read the story at the same time lol

this was good all you need is a good story teller voice and it be better i'll still rate this high cause the music chosen was also good as the story made

sad moments, happy moments, they were all strong had effect on me abit haha XD keep up the good work hope you make more

take your time cause most flash are hard to make hahah im try to learn how to use it after i find a program