Oh dang

Well this was an interesting one I like the idea and seems a bit outdated but is still interesting seems like it did help back in the day but looks well put together too so nice game here

~X~

Hehe, well this was a different type of tutorial. If I was in school still I'd definitely try it out, remember playing around with balls of paper and bits of eraser, and rubber bands. Ah, good days. Nice initiative on this!

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Made me smile.

I like the idea of little 'tutorials' like this, even if I hoped that it'd be an abstract defense-clone, with text representing all objects and characters.

Anyway, my opportunities for such hijinks have passed, but I got a smile from the idea.

Some better presentation (neater graphics, maybe a soft bg tune) would be nice.

I liked 'ahh my eye!'.

K

^^Good Points^^
Definitely an interesting tutorial. You added some humor to the instructions, and they were fairly clear. Interesting to see such a tutorial on NG, as most tuts deal with Flash. I don't have a textbook on me, but when I return to school in the fall I will definitely try this out.

^^Needs Improving^^
I think maybe a few different angles of the second fold stage could be used. It was a bit confusing.

okay one

that was an alright tutorial. not all that much to this one here, but the sketches were alright in this one.