Score: 8

"good one"

by: KWAS71KCK

date: July 10, 2007

that was a pretty nice animation. i really liked the plot behind this one... we all go through something similar sooner or later in life. the audio in this one was pretty nice one, i really liked the sketches and drawings in this one.. they were very nice and definitely suited this one. i really liked this one, good work on it.

Score: 10

"AMAZING"

by: holyestgrail

date: July 9, 2007

The music suited it perfectly. Yet I agree that end part looked like popcorn but other than that very well done!! Nice Drawings. AMAZING!!!

Score: 8

"Pop-Corn?"

by: CUCCOOLEGEND

date: July 9, 2007

Everything was fantastic, the animation was smooth, the drawing were very nice. I just have one concern, at the end the things that were flying through the screen looked like Pop-Corn. I have to agree with Beta7, add more detail to that. Other than that, great!

Score: 8

"Perfect!"

by: aos393

date: July 9, 2007

Original, new, loved it...

Score: 9

"Very artistic"

by: beta7

date: July 9, 2007

Great submission! Its nice to see a submission come through the portal that was well planned with good drawing skill. I gave you a 4/5.

I realize that the "shakiness" of the frames were intended by you as part of your style, and it worked well. I just personally didn't like it. I would have liked to have seen a more steady picture. But again, that's just me.

Also, the end scene with the....I believe rose petals?....was hard to interpret. If they were rose petals or flowers, some more detail might help to show this.

Thanks again for your submission, it was very well done. I really liked that you told a story and used no words. Very well done.