Score: 9
"Childish, no. Childlike, yes. And nifty, too."
date: July 8, 2007
Childish is when someone acts bratty and immature. Childlike is when someone has that wonderful, playful, unjaded, "see the world the first time" quality.
Cute. Charming. Some big words for a small children's story, but it was still fun to read. I think you hit the bullseye for your target audience pretty neatly.
Thanks for sharing. Like a rainbow, it's a refreshing thing to see around here in Newgrounds.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah I guess there's a difference between the two xD (Childish and childlike)... Those are very nice things to hear from someone on Newgrounds. Thank you for taking the time to review! ^^