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Didn't see THAT coming!
The walking animation was crude (no feet?) but the story in the animation was pretty funny. I definitely will be staying away from Viagra. And I might give my dog away, too.
I liked his shirt. Nice touch. His, umm.. junk was REALLY weird-looking. Yikes! His day got worse from there.
You also had some weird bugs in the movie in the BG. The lines on the bed moved? It was weird, I don't know what happened. If you didn't, when you make something so multi-colored, make a new Symbol, then build it, even if it uses many layers. It will fix those lines.
I hope to see you improve the animation and graphics/shading. The story is great, so I'm sure you've got more stuff, too that'll be funny.
Yea it was my first so it was rather primitive. Glad you liked the storyline i got the idea from a multitude of sources.
I'll have to look into those bugs, i noticed the border seems broken on one side, maybe I'll get around to fixing that.
Thanks for the review i have come a long way since this submission and hope to make more soon.
It is pretty good for a first considering that many other first's "stink-a-lot"
Im a newbie in flash and unfourtanely (<---is this a word?) where i live nobody teaches flash so, like you i gotta read a lot of tutorials (my first animation was crappy so i didnt uploaded it to Ng cause i knew it´ll get blammed in a second, you can watch it if you want, it is in Deviantart, just search for danizen93 )
BTW today i learned that i have to let the nature's course flow and dont use viagra
I also feel a bit guilty cause im watching it in my grandma´s house
Haha you watched it at your grandmas thats awesome. Im glad you like it it was fun making it, even tho it was a pain learning all the basic techniques. I have a pretty good amount of time on flash now so hopefully my next submission will come out better. I am working on something new and juggling schoolwork at the same time so no promises yet of when it will come out :). And i looked at your vid, its not too bad just needs to be a longer, I liked the jet pack thing.
decent and all around
pretty funny good song and good use of irony
Thanks : ) Your review is much appreciated.
The joke is as old as viagra, and it's not even a good joke.
The flash itself was done quite well, but the framerate was a bit too slow, so the whole thing took quite long before it came to it's climax (no pun intended).
Hum lets see Viagra is 8 years old so the joke is no older then the highly rated Matrix animations. I really have no idea what joke you are referring to. There is NO joke out there where a man takes Viagra and stabs himself through his head only to have a dog rip his balls off. And it took a long time to come to a climax? You are incorrect unless you consider 60 seconds of your time that precious. Decent attempt at a helpful review. I give your review a 3/10. Only insight you provided is a higher framerate [although its 26fps] and and an opinion of the humor type.
Im usually not a big fan of anything other then original animations made from scratch but the end made me laugh. I suggest more of that rather then a video of some one playing himself. Im sure we are all familiar with this poor kind of animation and im sure we have all seen videos of the sort on popular vid sites.
k thx bye
I am extremely surprised by how ignorant this comment is. "Im usually not a big fan of anything other then original animations made from scratch". The entire thing is mad e from scratch, every single component except the picture on the wall in the background. Im glad the end made you laugh but im not going to make a montage of numerous people spitting their skulls with their own cock, i doubt that will be entertaining.
There is absolutely NO video where a guy splits his head open with his own cock and has his dog eat off his balls. Id love for you to pm me an example of "this poor kind of animation and I'm sure we have all seen videos of the sort on popular video sites." There is nothing like this out there therefore i should be given a bit more credit for uniqueness.
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