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update: seriously this cartoon is horrible and is chock full of pathetic awkward attempts by myself to be funny with bad timing and no real jokes. i do not know why i entered this into TGSNT. i assume i was drunk at the time.
You're more depressing than 3 dead babies.
Heres how it goes. I like your work.. Nothing will ever change that. No matter how much you want to whine and complain about your animation, it still does my heart justice to see you bring your works here. But whats with all this disclaimer nonsense... You have to slap warning labels on your animations on how bad they are!? what a shitload of fuck!
You are your own worst critic! This animation wasn't the best, I'll say it right now. I think you tried too hard to be funny in some places (afterall how much can you say about bees), but the animation was superb. Not tweenfest '07 as you make it seem.
Have some confidence in your work. Ya know, it's kinda ironic how all the big name animators out there (IWP, Knox) have little to no talent in entertaining people, yet there so full of themselves! You, on the other hand, have so much more on them its not even funny, but you have absolutely no confidence in your abilities.
A modest review, by a modest fan.
Knova586 (2:22:59 AM): wrote a review for joey's bright idea
Knova586 (2:23:16 AM): i think it accurately portrays what i stand for
Knova586 (2:23:23 AM): no, im not yungjazz
Knova586 (2:23:25 AM): now go die
You really wore it out man
I just didn't like it, I cracked a grin when the guy first mentioned selling bees, but from there, I started finding myself fiddling with an exention cord in boredom. The concept just wasn't the material for a whole cartoon. Bees. Okay, bees...bees...guy sits on giant bee, bees are the shit...So gangsta too, even threw in some black people to rave about the bees... I am so straight, wake me up when it's over. Granted, you can draw pretty alright though. Some fBf would be nice. 3/10.
My name is YungJazz and I point out the obvious to feed my power trip.
Contrary to the statement on your loading screen, your animation actually contains _pictures_ of bees, not bees themselves. I thought I was going to get some freebies (ha!). Aside from that disappointment it was a good flash.
awsome work, keep it up
you're pretty good! YOU SHOULD JOIN MY FLASH STUDIO LOLLOLOLOLODODOSSJAjirjwij
Bring a buddy.
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