Score: 1
"Eh..."
date: November 16, 2009
GOOD: I love satire and I think those "Above the Influence" commercials need a parody.
BAD: The graphics and animation were minimalist and the audio was annoying.
IMPROVE: I would say remake the whole thing so it doesn't look like you made it during lunch break. You could add in more detail or colour on certain things in the graphics and you could add in more animation like the dog walking with his legs moving instead of tweening. Voice acting would also be nice and maybe a better selection of music.
OVERALL: It was a nice concept but it was poorly executed. Even though I gave tips on how to improve, I'm going to assume this wasn't an honest-to-God serious attempt at making a commercial parody. Sorry but this style does not work for me however others may disagree with me.