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Submitted: 07/03/2007 | 08:41AM EST

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Genre: Comedy - Original

Current Score: 3.34 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Universe Domination - Chapter 4
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Here it is, the last part of the 'Mars is Next!' trilogy. I know I've said this for all of my other flashes which are to do with the Universe Domination series, but if you havn't seen the other two parts yet, then I really suggest that you watch them before watching this one to understand the story better.

If you look at the main menu, you'll see the logo for Universe Domination. I know it really sucks right now, but I will see about making a better logo than that one. All I need is some suggestions. Also, there were a few scenes that were deleted from the entire trilogy and I plan to make a flash with those deleted scenes. I won't say when it will be done, but it'll be submitted when it's done.

Enjoy the flash!
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Flash info:

FPS: 30
Frames: 7765
Time length: 4 minutes 18 seconds
.fla filesize: 83MB
Started: 26th June
Finished: 3rd July

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Average Score: 8.1 / 10

Score: 10
Fro

"A review title use to be here."

by: Fro
date: June 9, 2009

Another good part of the series. By far one of your best ones in my opinion. Time travel heh? Messed up stuff.

I guess the real question is since Bahamut has succeeded what will he do in the next one? He's already destroyed Mars so why another one in the series. Something I won't figure out until tomorrow probably.

The amnesia was fun though. :( Imagine the life Bahamut could have had if it stuck around.

Anyway, good all around. Decent graphics and animation, good voice acting, and great story line. Can't wait till tomorrow to see the next one.

*Laptop battery dies*

June 10, 2009

Author's Response:

That was all that happened besides the deleted scenes. :( When I reboot my series, I gotta try and redo this series.

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Score: 9
Haggard

"\m/"

date: March 14, 2008

Congratulations on finally destroying Mars, heh.

It was a very good final episode for this little series of yours. You continued the story very well and the scenes that played in the past were very good. Good thing that you have that little pointer indicating who's speaking, or else the conversation between "Present Bahamut" and "Past Bahamut" would have been very confusing ^^.

I really liked the menu and the scene selection here. Be sure to include that if you plan another small series (or if you actually continue with the plot of the "Mars is next!"-series).
Also the background image of the main menu was a nice thing, too.

{ Review Request Club }

March 14, 2008

Author's Response:

Mars is Next! has been concluded. It is part of the dormat series known as Universe Domination. The series will not resume until after I make my 100th flash, but even then, I'll need to write up THE WHOLE SERIES before making another flash. And yes, that does mean I might have to remake some of the flashes in the series already.

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Score: 10
Endsvill

"YEAHHHHH!"

date: November 21, 2007

Finally mars is gone :D oh i zomed in to the text where the moon use to be so i could read it :D

November 21, 2007

Author's Response:

You should see the Graham's Weird Day trilogy.

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Score: 7
Bezman

"A cool end to the chapter."

by: Bezman
date: September 29, 2007

I actually rather liked the logo - just felt you should've gotten rid of the white bits around earth and maybe changed 'mars is next' to black and given 'universe domination' a black outline to make them more readable.

Also, I'd personally use a thicker font with sharper angles, like 'Impact'.

I liked the time-travelling aspect and loved the '...sad' line. Also, I found it amusing how you're so laid back about meeting your future self.

The effects on the 'thoughts' speech were cool.

One thing I'd urge you to do is make the subtitles click on-off-able. Your voices are good enough to no longer need subtitles and keeping some AS movie to movie to make subtitle togglable would be simple enough.

Looking forward to seeing what comes of this series!

September 30, 2007

Author's Response:

Yeah, I've been thinking about making the subtitles click on-off-able for sometime, but what I need to do is get some tips on how to get the AS for turning it on and off.

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Score: 6
milinko959

"K"

date: July 9, 2007

^^Good Points^^
I think I understand what was going on, and I'm pretty sure it was a decent end to the series. It was really confusing though, so I'm not sure I got it all.

^^Needs Improving^^
Yeah, all that kind of made my brain hurt. It was a bit hard to understand, especially for those who don't know what is going on to start with. Still fun to watch though.

Author's Response:

Hopefully with the missing gaps in the series, I can make the plot a lot better since starting the series with 'Valentine's Day' or 'Graham's Weird Day' is a crappy start, to be honest.

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