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first over the gap made by my friend chris his user name is fallingbrook-sucks
This is just... bad. Please polish your animation a little before sending it in.
All the films you submitted to NG sucks. I go with Golden's review down there. If your reading this, people of NG, don't watch this.
How did your flash pass judgement, the movie is boring. I even showed my sister and she didn't like it. So, I am not looking at this again. >:-(
omg that was so funny when he extenguished it and VWOOM!!!!! i loved it!!! but i want to laugh more.. =(
It wasn't too bad however it could use allot of improvement. Although the concept is not too original, i like it. The idea of multiple "people" trying to jump over a gap but failing in different ways offers a verity which is entertaining. You do need to improve and you have two options for EASY, improvement. Keep the background but zoom up a bit and make the animation smoother, add some blood, maybe smoke of the bodies burning etc. [in short add detail to the animation]. Another way is the leave the animation as is but work on the background. It is very primitive and could be easily improved, refer to flash tutorials on the collections page, specifically the ones that have the "The following are good artistic resources:" heading. Something as simple as creating depth in the background and making the fire look better could help allot. Good luck in the future
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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