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Update... I noticed I uploaded the wrong version, the other one had a loader / replay button. Sorry.
I made this animation for my NCFE award at GCSE level animation.
I have only touched Flash a couple of times in my life, and im a complete rookie, so go easy on me ;)
The animation is based on Dolly the sheep.
Well firstly i have to say that you giving the sheep a female companion at the end was really cute and was a nice way to end your flash piece. I thought the ball of fluffs traveling on the belt before landing in the chemicals was pretty funny. Nice choice of background music too, very soft. Overall a lovely flash piece.
Looked good, but not mutch too it
Cloned looked good imo but it was just too short. It seemed like you had set up the story for alot more and then it just came to an end. Good for a little giggle, but not mutch. Through I would like to see what you could do on a longer one cause this one started out promising!
PS: I give it a 1 in violence just because the other sheep are meen =/ XD
Yeah I kinda had to finish it or I failed my course as I was already late :P
I dont want to go back to it though I'm not sure on the storyline and want to try something new.
Thanks for the review :)
This is so goood even though iy has no humor and bad story if your a rookie your awesome cant wait to see more of you AWESOME
Aww thanks :)
not bad for first attempt
if you had created more movies before this i would have been dissapointed, but seeing as how its your first flash, it wasnt bad at all. in fact i liked it!
Thankyou very much :)
I hope to maybe learn some more Flash and make some more animations :)
Awsome for first try.
If this is indeed one of the first times you've used flash this is an amzing feet. Otherwise it is a very mediocre animation. It REALLY was not funny but you conveyed your idea effectively.
Yes this is one of my first times using Flash, and it wasn't supposed to be funny :)
Thanks for review :)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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