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Jim mustered up the courage to get over his life long fear of playing in public.

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lol, if it wasn't for those tears this would have been pretty fun! I was wondering what kind of corny show it was going to be but... it turned out it wasn't corny at all. Great work for a first too, professional sound quality isn't that common either. Keep it going!

-cd-

not bad one

that was an alright animation. it was cool for a first animation, though a little bit random overall, but it was still cool to watch.

Funny and good.

Good job.

It was pretty impressive for a first flash

it had good graphics, and its your first flash.
(90% of first flashes use stick figures, but you didnt and it was ok)

I did kinda like the style but the ending was kinda cruel, So... well yea... i took some points off.

That sound is impressive, I might want to try that mike some time.

Violence got +3 because someone threw a pizza. ( It wasn't that funny, I took it in a mean way.)

Well, theres nothing really interactive about it, just a play button.

Like I said before, I thought it was mean, yet funny at the same time, but more cruel, which is why the humor has 1 point.

Overall I think 8 points is right, its impressive for a first flash, just not my kind of style...

END OF REVIEW

Good Job!

That was funny...

Graphics: I gave you a 7 because there was room for improvement with the character drawing. Not bad, just could have been a little sharper... (overall you didn't loase any points)

Style: I liked the simple, sweet, and cruel twist at the end... I didn't see that coming...

Sound: Great SOund quality...

Violence: Not a lot of violence, I gave it a 5 because he cried... LMAO, (You didn't lose any overall points for lack of violence)

Interactivity: It's not a game so you didn't lose any points for lack of interactivity...

Humor:
I loved the ending... this was funny...

Overall I gave you a 10 and voted 5... good job...

Looneyboy,
-NGN-

Credits & Info

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2,499
Votes
10
Score
3.34 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 26, 2007
10:10 PM EDT