Score: 4
"Better than Happiest Tree, but still a bit lacking"
date: June 26, 2007
Yes, it's better, but it still lacks a bit. The graphics could've used a little more detail. The ninja doesn't even look LIKE a ninja, just a samurai. The blood from the sanurai's sword on the end page actually curves into the air. And the last bandit from the group that lived must've had some weird sprain or someting, because his arm looks really slanted then going downward.
The sound was also a bit better, and the style would've had a greater rating if you made it into a "revenge" story or something- if you had had a little more background (i.e. the bandits destroyed his hometown, or the bandits killed a family member in the first place) would've helped viewers understand a LOT more.
Author's Response:
oooh, boo hoo it wasnt perfect, i mean you hate it because the ninja looks more like a samurai?