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Sorry about the big filesize... It took me months to make, but here it is !
Update : Took away the remaining time thing, didn't seem to work correctly... I'll fix it later
nice animation. it was pretty good.
This was strange, but interesting. I think you need to slow things down a bit, transitions are too fast. One question too, why do you always draw your girls with their hands behind their back? Can you not draw hands? Because if that's the case, there are other shortcuts to avoid drawing hands but have it look a little less awkward. Because when the girl was on the ground crying and her hands were behind her back,....it just wouldn't work, she'd fall over! XP But really, it was a good job:) I loved the animation! :D
Work on animation, the lines go by to fast to read, the plot wasn't amazing, but it captured my animation, overall if i had to say one word about it, i'd say "continue", it was quite short, things moved a little fast, try slowing it down, in the beggining i was wondering where you could have possibly been trying to go with this, but you pulled, for those of you wanting a surprise ending you will be satisfied in this movie!
oh my god...he killed his parents..?
wow. that really grabbed me. i give you a 10. Congrats!
Good plot, kept me interested. Trying uping the overall sound quality and adding a few more SFX. And while you got drawing skilz, you might want to work on the general animation timing a litte more (maybe study a few traditional animation tutorials or books). Other than that, I am REALLY looking forward to seeing more in this series. The quality and over all production effort really shines through. Congratulations, you got a 5!
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