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Jun 18, 2007 | 12:49 PM EDT

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Universe Domination - Chapter 4

I have created a title for my flash series which are to do with the destructions in the universe known as 'Universe Domination'. I think that title is perfect because it nicely reflects my aim in these series of flashes and that's to take over the universe.

The first chapter of the series is the 'Graham's Weird Day' trilogy. The second chapter is 'F*** OFF YOU F*****!' and the third chapter is 'The idiots on the moon'. Now this is the fourth chapter. BTW, I do not know how many chapters in total there'll be altogether. Also, the Sun and the Earth being destroyed in my earlier flashes do not count towards this series.

Anyway, onto the flash. This continues the story of the first part of the 'Mars is Next!' trilogy. If you havn't seen the first part yet, then I strongly suggest that you watch the first part before watching this one to understand the story better (And I said for that flash that you should watch the previous flash before that one and so on XD).

Enjoy the flash!

Flash info:

FPS: 30
Frames: 9508
Time length: 5 minutes 17 seconds (my longest flash yet)
.fla filesize: 58.3MB
Started: 14th June
Finished: 18th June



Rated 5 / 5 stars


That was a rather interesting second part. Also why did AfroStud and Graham end up destroying Bahamut's house anyway? It seemed kind of pointless. Also kind of got a good laugh from the stuff scrolling at the top of the screen for the news parts.

Also had no idea you could talk to people on the TV. Webcam maybe? Also how did you manage to give everyone amnesia?

Oh well, answers aren't needed I think, very interesting anyways, nice piece.

Murray responds:

Because I put a hole in Graham's house.

Also, magic! *snort* *snort*


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nice

This was a really long episode, but in my opinion this was one of your best submissions yet.

I loved all the random jokes and stuff you put in this one. I thought that odd *gasp* sound Bahamut made, when he saw that his house was destroyed, was very funny. The news-report was kinda funny too, although I didn't know what to focus on as there was a banner with random funny stuff and a news-report with random funny stuff going at the same time.

The few special effects this movie contained weren't done well in my opinion though. Like the fireball Bahamut attacked Afro with and Afro disappearing. It could've used a sound effect there. Same goes for the amnesia... circles. But on it's not really such a big deal, since this series isn't really about the action and violence (other than blowing up the universe).

Overall 9 out of 10, 5 out of 5. Like I said: one of your best flashes yet, if not the best. Hopefully the upcoming episodes will be just as good.


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Murray responds:

"since this series isn't really about the action and violence (other than blowing up the universe)."

The hell with Gears of War and Call of Duty! XD


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice Story

Wow, probably some of the best plot/storyline that I have ever seen you use in a flash submission. Just good all around and really kept me interested. There was a lot of subtle humor that you might not catch if you weren't paying attention.

I had trouble trying to read other news things while trying to pay attention to the main story line, but I am happy that I did both because it was pretty interesting.

Wade running around in the background was pretty random. :P Nice plot twist at the end with Bahamut being able to go back into the past. Perhaps he will be able to destroy Mars himself. Perhaps he will make the same mistake. D: I'll find out in a few minutes I suppose.

Murray responds:

We all have trouble with the headlines on news reports, especially when we focus more on the news itself.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Very nice story you came up with here. Fits in very well with the other flashes of that series and also has your usual humor in it. Great!

I think Bahamut should practice his amnesia powers a bit, so he can give amnesia to just one person at a time. Would be good to pay back A_S, that little sucker XD .

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Murray responds:

Flash Reviews: 333 :0

Also, nope, practising amnesia won't work. It's like an on and off switch. You can't have it set in the middle. :P


Rated 5 / 5 stars

poor bahamut

Your character never seems to catch a break. Oh well good flash though.

Murray responds:

Hey, I should hardly get any breaks on my flashes. It makes things more "Interesting". :P