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I have been working on this movie for one-and-a-half years. It doesn't have any dialogue, so in case you don't get the story, I've added a Q&A at the end of the movie (careful, though: the buttons are a bit buggy).
But needs work. Compared to what I've seen you've got a long way ahead of you.
Of course, the story was lil' interesting. It's just the way you conveyed it that was iffy.
I look forward to seeing better in the future :3
Geez, such an honest review! Thanks, LtSurge659! Now, I'm DEFINITELY going to use your music in one of my future productions.
And yes, I know I could have done it a lot better, I just couldn't find the time to do it better. I said, "that's enough, I won't bother with this movie anymore".
At least it wasn't a silly "fight movie" with stick figures saying "I 4M T3H 1337 M4ST4!!!1!11111!!1!"...
Sorry for making such a boring Flash. It won't happen again. I promise.
I really Did not Understand this. You shoudlnt have to put a Q&A At the end of a flash becouase its un watchable and no one could understand it. Anyway, you could of done better, alot Better. Your Flash skill is good, but this really wasent 1 & a Half Years of Work. A waste like the guy who posted Before me.
I know, I KNOW... But I don't know why did I do it. I don't know why I did I submit it to NG. I don't know why I put the Q&A at the end (I KNEW this was a bad idea!).
Thank you for your comments - and don't worry; I won't make the same mistake again.
what a waste!
I DID protect it- just and I don't mean to be hostile but it was barely watchable. All those great backgrounds with such lame character art and limited animation. A reasonable story, not expressed at all while you are in it.
You seriously need to collaborate with this if you can't see yourself sorting it.
It has a lot of potential for a major sort out and resub. If all else fails you, PM me and I will see if any of the DS crew feel like taking it on.
Thank you. I was disappointed with the movie, too - and it's my own movie! I just wanted to start off with something simple, before I move out to more complicated projects. I'm a beginner on Flash, so consider this as a practice.
Thanks again for the critic, IceDragon64, and for all the bad comments - at least, you were sincere.
After all, "TGSR" may be "barely watchable", but it was better than seeing two stick figures in a "DragonBall Z" parody, right?
Theres a nice attempt at a story and plot, but its difficult to make head or tale of who is who, and the ending leaves many unanswered questions. You could add dialogue by subtiltles if you are struggling with audio.
Graphics are OK, but a bit static - animation takes time and effort, but it's what makes the best flash stand out. The characters are a bit block / geometric rather than natural looking.
It's not a bad effort, but with a bit of attention to detail could be even better.
Believe me, these are the worst characters I've ever designed. I hate myself for creating them. For some reason, I had so much fun while creating the backgrounds that I didn't feel like creating equally good characters.
Thank you for your comments and ratings, DoctorBlood. I appreciate your effort.
Was pretty good
That was alright mate
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