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This is an animation I did for my final college project, Its based on a comic series I did years ago... its only the first half of the pilot episode as I was on a short time scale, I'm not sure when I'll have time to do the next half.
In the meantime I hope you enjoy the first half.
Good! But some major flaws...
I'll start out with the good points.
For one, the characters wer pretty funny and interesting. Not much was said about them, maybe you could have done a little introduction for all of them like you did with the sadistic frog dude. Also, the writing wasn't bad at all, nor were the character drawings. A bit lazy at times, but solid enough. However, one thing ruined it: The Animation. The animation was terrible and really, most of it wasn't how you drew it, it was the FPS you chose. What was it like 5 frames per second? That didn't work, man, maybe study the walk cycle a little better too.
All and all, it wasn't bad, the humor was entertaining enough and the length was perfect, but please choose a different framerate next time, at least 10-12. Othe than that, you did a good job, have great ideas and I look forward to the next one. :)
Thanks, your right about the frame rate, I only had a few weeks to get this done so I had to rush it a bit, also this is just pilot so I have jumped in to the middle of the story, I'm glad that the characters came through for most people. When I start the series proper the animation will be of a better standard as well as the voice acting, thank you for your comments.
Looks more like british television to me.
You know how we americans get to sleep on those nights when we just can't fall asleep? we watch the BBC! I hope to god nobody watches this toon while they are driving.
One damn fine piece of work.
We don't want this lost in the portals forever do we so I suggest people watch and vote fairly on this (I suggest watching this a lot it's so good)
You got talent dude! Just improve the graphics and the voice acting! Keep the rest! You've done a good job!
I think it is funny. I onlt thought that the voices sounded a little unconvincing.
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