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Submitted: 06/13/2007 | 02:22AM EST

File Info: Movie | 5.4 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 2.32 / 5.00

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Ok another attempt at flash, this one is abit longer and i tried to sink the music and sounds better, hope you all like it!

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Average Score: 3.0 / 10

Score: 2
Gott-des-Krieges

"Practice, practice, practice....."

date: June 13, 2007

Several things:

1. The music should carry through or at least make some kind of noise. I hated how it stopped and it was silent after the intro.
2. LONGER! All your movies have been really short, if you can't commit a the time to make the movie a decent length, then don't bother.
3. Practice. Play around a little, and get better.

Author's Response:

thanks for the advice! i'll be sure to do better next time!

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Score: 1
maddrox420

"Eh"

date: June 13, 2007

i dont really like movies that only play for 10 second its not worth watching to me. make a longer one man.

Author's Response:

can do, thanks.

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ShinobiLunchbox

"..."

date: June 13, 2007

noticed uve been posting a bunch of sprite movies....poor quailty one at that, all of them a few seconds long, and they end the same "To be continues..."
If your flash only tooke 30 minutes to make, dont bother posting it.

Author's Response:

well, it didn't take 30 seconds to make, and i'm still just learning flash and, no offense, but it seems to me like you have no flash as well...so perhaps we're both learning?

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Score: 2
Take-Down

"grrr"

date: June 13, 2007

Dont submitt your first few flash movies to newgrounds, we have high standard.
first off. read the rules. you need a preloader, if you canty make one then download the newgrounds one.
second, OPTIMIZE YOUR MUSIC (newgrounds dot com/flash/audio.html)
third, get better at flash

Author's Response:

this i need help on, i tried downloading the preloader, but when its on my desktop and I click onto it...it just takes me to a website with a blank page, if ANYONE can help me with this, it'd be greatly appreciated!
oh and thanks for the advice!

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Score: 10
f0aMyrEaPer

"loved it"

date: June 13, 2007

it was cool....it had the gunzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz gunny gun gun gun gun hehehehehe i wasnt payin attention to the violence so i dont really know

Author's Response:

thanks, i'm glad you liked it!

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