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Jun 10, 2007 | 6:16 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place June 11, 2007

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Inspired by Saturday morning cartoons, young Hamish embarks upon a coming-of-age journey where he stumbles across friendship, corrupt government officials and, inevitably, evil robots.

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Part 2 & 3 are now submitted!

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Reviews


Deaththe14thDeaththe14th

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 20, 2009

Ahhh, yes

I do remember watching this one a while back... possibly on the day you uploaded it?
Yes, you can do good story work away from violence, so I'll accept that Captain Violence is just a parody of ridiculous superhero and move on from critiquing your story-writing abilities, haha.

Pretty well done, but it's clear your animation has come a long way from back here.


sorbitol responds:

HAHA! Thanks Deaththe14th!
I'm flattered you took the time to check my other work :)

The challenge was to try an make a decent series of cartoons without taking the easy way out (video-game references, swearing...etc...) and to try and practice writing stories and see what I could do in Flash. This must be about 2 years old now... doesn't time fly?

Thankfully, I have improved a little since then.

Thanks for another cool review, Deaththe14th! I really do appreciate them!

:D


NewFarOutNewFarOut

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 11, 2007

Cock-AA-Knee Robotz!!!

Cockney droids RULE and the government Looney looks like my boss. Well done, sir.


sorbitol responds:

It was a pleasure! Thank you, kind sir.


x0AuG0xx0AuG0x

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 10, 2007

Very good start

I think this has the core of a great flash series. You've established some characters, a story arc, and a theme. I would just work on the fight animation if you plan on making it action-adventure, as the fights in this one leave a lot to be desired. I also liked the humor, but it seemed to lag off a bit towards the middle. If it was consistently more humorous, and had a bit better fight animation, it could be a classic series.

You've created a scenario that reminds me a lot of old 1980's Saturday morning cartoons.


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sorbitol responds:

Thanks for the constructive review.
I've got a better idea of what I should work on.
I'm glad you mainly liked it, though!


Spud302Spud302

Rated 4 / 5 stars August 24, 2009

not the best

but its ok
the animation was good
the fight scenes needed alittle work but that will get better over time
all in all not bad


sorbitol responds:

Thanks, mate!

Yeah, the fights could use a bit of a polish I suppose but it was the best I could do at the time - the other episodes are a bit more slick.

Appreciate the review! Thanks! :D


thisnameisnottakenthisnameisnottaken

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 10, 2007

I like the character

A funny little guy on an interesting adventure. I like the main char the graphics and the monologue, the fight scenes were less than great.

Keep up the good work *thumbs up*


sorbitol responds:

Thanks dude! As long as people like the main characters and story it shouldn't be a problem improving the fight sequences!
Thanks for letting me know what you liked!