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Inspired by Saturday morning cartoons, young Hamish embarks upon a coming-of-age journey where he stumbles across friendship, corrupt government officials and, inevitably, evil robots.
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Very good start
I think this has the core of a great flash series. You've established some characters, a story arc, and a theme. I would just work on the fight animation if you plan on making it action-adventure, as the fights in this one leave a lot to be desired. I also liked the humor, but it seemed to lag off a bit towards the middle. If it was consistently more humorous, and had a bit better fight animation, it could be a classic series.
You've created a scenario that reminds me a lot of old 1980's Saturday morning cartoons.
Thanks for the constructive review.
I've got a better idea of what I should work on.
I'm glad you mainly liked it, though!
I like the character
A funny little guy on an interesting adventure. I like the main char the graphics and the monologue, the fight scenes were less than great.
Keep up the good work *thumbs up*
Thanks dude! As long as people like the main characters and story it shouldn't be a problem improving the fight sequences!
Thanks for letting me know what you liked!
I thought the artwork and animation was great. The story kinda bit though, it wasn't interesting, funny or dramatic at all. Try spending as much time as you did on the art, on the script. A couple of good jokes would have made this a 10, but once again, the plot lacked substance. The voices were alright. That too could be improved, but not too bad. I voted 4.
Thanks for your comments.
WOW! This is so awesome! Everything is done really well, great graphics, sound, and style. Pretty funny, and written extraordinarily well, especially for NG. Your characters are interesting and unique, great acting and personality. I'm putting this on my favorites list!
Great job! Make more, make us proud!
Thanks a lot! Your review made my day!
Good stuff man. I think your flash will make it to the frotpage ^^
Thanks for your kind words!
It make all the hard work finally pay off!
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