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Submitted: 06/10/2007 | 06:16PM EST

File Info: Movie | 5 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.77 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Inspired by Saturday morning cartoons, young Hamish embarks upon a coming-of-age journey where he stumbles across friendship, corrupt government officials and, inevitably, evil robots.

Thanks for the front page, sir!

Part 2 & 3 are now submitted!

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Average Score: 8.1 / 10

Score: 8
Deaththe14th

"Ahhh, yes"

date: October 20, 2009

I do remember watching this one a while back... possibly on the day you uploaded it?
Yes, you can do good story work away from violence, so I'll accept that Captain Violence is just a parody of ridiculous superhero and move on from critiquing your story-writing abilities, haha.

Pretty well done, but it's clear your animation has come a long way from back here.

October 20, 2009

Author's Response:

HAHA! Thanks Deaththe14th!
I'm flattered you took the time to check my other work :)

The challenge was to try an make a decent series of cartoons without taking the easy way out (video-game references, swearing...etc...) and to try and practice writing stories and see what I could do in Flash. This must be about 2 years old now... doesn't time fly?

Thankfully, I have improved a little since then.

Thanks for another cool review, Deaththe14th! I really do appreciate them!

:D

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Score: 8
Spud302

"not the best"

date: August 24, 2009

but its ok
the animation was good
the fight scenes needed alittle work but that will get better over time
all in all not bad

August 26, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks, mate!

Yeah, the fights could use a bit of a polish I suppose but it was the best I could do at the time - the other episodes are a bit more slick.

Appreciate the review! Thanks! :D

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Score: 10
DarkRider2000

"Getting pro eh? ^^"

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 9/10
Story: 8/10
Audio:9/10
Dynamic:9/10

Animation: it may not been 3-d but it look way more professional than all the previous ones

Story: bunch of killer robots, government lunatic,lazy kid...its all a good story needs

Audio: combining background music, and now voice acting, this is getting professional

Dynamic: all from before and now credits, this is getting big :)

February 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you again!

This was my first time writing a script and getting some friends to voice act for me.
I remember finding this a real challenge to make but it came out aright (I hope!).

Also, I used audio portal music rather than my own ridiculous creations this time so it sounded a lot better (I hope!).

This episode was both loved and hated in equal measure. I HAD to make a sequel! :D

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Score: 10
JunkYardAnimations

"holy fuck"

date: October 29, 2008

I dont know why its only rated 3.76, the animation and style was amazing, i was really impressed. Plus it was funny and entertaining, i gotta watch part 2

February 14, 2009

Author's Response:

Hey! Thank man!

Glad you liked this!

As for the score, it just keeps me trying harder! :D

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Score: 10
cardmaster1

"wow"

date: March 28, 2008

that was one of the best videos ive seen

April 1, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank a lot!
I really appreciate this cool review!
Cheers buddy!

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