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Urbia pt 2

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Jun 9, 2007 | 11:12 AM EDT

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the second installment of 3. its about above average length (4:30 minutes ish) and to undertsand onyhting thats goign on you must have watched urbia part 1, so please do that prior to watching this one. it takes a little whiel to build up the the climax but it gets very intense near the end. *** special thanks to radiotube clock for the drawings of the ccpn and radiotuibe clock***



Rated 3 / 5 stars

I liked it

I liked your flash, the style and animation showed good effort on your part. the story was good and made for a well balanced flash clocks are silly if you ask me but you did good with this one, nice job.

Decent Flash.


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Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol awesome

good stuff, interesting plot and its good to see me and my ship in there too! You have a cool art style although I am curious, what frame rate do you use? Some of the animation could be a bit smoother but whatever. I usually use 24 fps myself. Keep up the good work.

Organclock responds:

actually im quite the noob... no action scripting... all tweens... also only 12 fps!!!! all you have to do is shorten the length of the actual motion
you know... i think ive watched that on the bridge 10000 times tryign to figure out how u did the digimon scene


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Well done.

Another job well done. Its a good continuation of part one. The storyline is excellent the style good good and i felt compelled to watch the whole thing. It started off a bit slow but i only feel like that built up anticipation to view the rest. The soundtrack seems a bit muffled and distant but the voices were good. The submission was also funny, particularity the parts when red star took acid and the credits [said something like kitty krew must die]. A good amount of violence, not too much like some movies where all you see is blood. The ending was surprising, i recognize that boat from some of radiotube's works. I'll be looking out for the third.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well... its clocks?

I can't say too much about this because it was confusing as hell. What I will say is... I can't believe a new clock submission auctually held my attention to the end of the flash. The flash was average and well I really dont care if I ever see an ending, but I give you credit for not making some pointless POS flash. I award you 3.3 out of 5 fish!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not Bad

As suggested I watched pt 1 first, thanks for the suggestion, it did put this one in perspective.
Pt 2 is much improved. The graphics were much better and it seemed to move along more smoothly. I would suggest the following changes though for your next part:

1) The voices are hard to hear at some parts, esp when the music is playing louder than the voices are speaking, so subtitling would make it easier to understand what's going on.

2) The part where you have the article to read is mostly unreadable, with it moving across the screen so rapidly, and so many lines to read that you're not sure what parts are important. Either move it more slowly, highlight the important parts, or just leave it still for long enough for people to read it all.