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DCorp's Cursor Tut V.2

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Jun 7, 2007 | 9:02 PM EDT

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V.2 of the original DCorp's Cursor Tut.
Difference of V.2!
4 More Songs
Better Graphics
Screenshots
Copy And Paste Actionscript
A Better Preloader
*Note* I fixed the clumsy mistake I made on page 3
Please make my dreams come true and add this to the flash tutorial page.Please...
Enjoy!

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infernocpfinfernocpf

Rated 5 / 5 stars

DEAR GOD DO NOT CLICK NO!!!

awesome very informative and usfull thanks.....other than the sand box thing -_-


This review is insanely well received!
DCorp responds:

Review the other tut not this one.


keyrealkeyreal

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Lol

Takes ages to load, and consists of only 3 frames. Nice designed, but ehh, this tutorial is small, so you don't need 4 songs and shit like that...
I've made a tutorial too, It's simple designed but there's a lot of more content...
Anyways, 8/10 :)
Make more :)


DCorp responds:

Holy shit, reviewer person :O


One-DollarOne-Dollar

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Not awful, but still not perfect

Ok, first off a bug I found, the Amusement Ride and Ante Up music descriptions appear when you scroll the mouse over the area they are located in instead of just the buttons

In terms of style, it tends to be a bit heavy and insulting. You're aiding people, so calling them 'noobs' and swearing a lot might not help that much.

The second page could be a bit clearer (by "a * sort of thing" I assume you mean the centre-point of the movieclip), in which case you could point out that this is the 'clicking point' of the mouse or whatever.

Overall its as lot better than some tutorials I've seen, but you don't cover a lot of ground. If the text for your tutorial can fit into essentially two pages, why not stretch it out with step-by-step screenshots and things?

The best thing about tutorial is the look. It's very easy to read and looks nice too. It seems reasonably friendly and accessible, which is what you want from a tutorial.

One other thing I'll mention is the music issue. Its a problem whenever people submit tutorials with music - the ballance between variety, length and loading times is a hard one. In this case I'd say a four page tutorial is not worth 6 MB and the loading time that comes with it. I'd just pick one song.

I hope this isn't all too negative, I'm just trying to give you a fair amount of feedback and as many pointers for areas to improve in as possible.


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DCorp responds:

I'm am glad you like it! Remember to sumbit it to the flash tutorial collection!


CarboCarbo

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not bad

nice tutorial you got here didnt understand it that much but whatever :D


DCorp responds:

Carbo your back!


rafattackrafattack

Rated 5 / 5 stars

moo

*takes out super indestruct-o-shield*
wut wut!


DCorp responds:

takes out "super indetruct-o-gun that pierces through bullets* Woot woot. Thanks for the 10
:D