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*Update* I finally figured out how to use those stupid preloaders... i hope it works for you now!!
My first flash submission-- be gentle.
Ola & Hayven are my friends from art class, and i used ola's name in a comic called "ola the spoon". This is the aftermath. you may want to turn the speakers up because its kinda quiet.. Enjoy!!
A good start.
Upon reading "first submission" i assumed i would be greeted with a stick figure animation at like 8fps containing around 70 frames. This submission was a pleasant surprise. The graphics are above par and the animation isn't the worst. It (animation) could be smoother but that will come in time. You had what appeared to be somewhat of a plot. You do need a preloader [consult some of the flash tutorials on the collections page] because some would be viewers may not wait to watch the submission thinking there is a problem with it. The play button and the sound was icing on the cake. Good luck with future submissions.
Thank you all for the positive reviews, you have encouraged me to work even harder!!
i love you all--
I definitly like the drawings. It's neat, but the sound quality is stinky. I mean, it gets loud in some parts and quiet in others. But overall.. it's not that bad it needs to be blammed, it's just not AMAZING. Bleach! :3 <3
it was alright
I thought that it was ok a couple of the things that need worked on are the graphics because alot of them were just really poorly drawn and some of the parts were really choppy which need to be fixed the sounds were way to quiet which means either talk louder,get new mic.,or use different webbies for the voices if you didnt make.
hooray for constructive critisism!! thank you for helping!
Really this is....odd. I'd've voted much higher if you hadn't used assorted gradients and what looked like a JPEG as backgrounds....it's not that hard to draw your own backgrounds, there are plenty of tutorials on the topic. Also the sound was way too quiet and the preloader did some strange things (though whether that's just my internet or your movie is debatable). All in all the artwork of the characters and the randomness of this movie were the best parts but it could still use some work. Still...better than another crappy stick battle for a first submission.
I just really liked this...
...and I can't quite place why. LoL Keep it up!
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