A good start.

Upon reading "first submission" i assumed i would be greeted with a stick figure animation at like 8fps containing around 70 frames. This submission was a pleasant surprise. The graphics are above par and the animation isn't the worst. It (animation) could be smoother but that will come in time. You had what appeared to be somewhat of a plot. You do need a preloader [consult some of the flash tutorials on the collections page] because some would be viewers may not wait to watch the submission thinking there is a problem with it. The play button and the sound was icing on the cake. Good luck with future submissions.

~Dna

Haha.

I definitly like the drawings. It's neat, but the sound quality is stinky. I mean, it gets loud in some parts and quiet in others. But overall.. it's not that bad it needs to be blammed, it's just not AMAZING. Bleach! :3 <3

it was alright

I thought that it was ok a couple of the things that need worked on are the graphics because alot of them were just really poorly drawn and some of the parts were really choppy which need to be fixed the sounds were way to quiet which means either talk louder,get new mic.,or use different webbies for the voices if you didnt make.
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I just really liked this...

...and I can't quite place why. LoL Keep it up!

Wootz!!!1

This movie is awsome!!!Loved every song you put in this thing.this flash is side splitting!!!!