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Jun 1, 2007 | 6:36 PM EDT

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An axe tries to destroy a line that keeps escaping its choppy attempts...

Reviews


AuzAuz

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Okay

I really liked the drawings. The background looked very good and I also loved the preloader. The song was also alright, but I personally don´t really like it when authors add a song that doesn´t really have anything to do with the movie.

Anyways, I think the "fight" could´ve been a little better. The axe just made a couple of spins and the line just moved over the screen a couple of times. Then the line turns into a sword, attacks the axe and then some random spaceship kills the axe and the sword... kinda weird if you ask me. It would cooler if the axe actually smashed some things while trying to hit the line. And there should be a much longer battle between the axe and sword. You should leave the spaceship cause that really didn´t made sense.

Overall 6 out of 10, 3 out of 5. The graphics were good, but that really is the only good part about it in my opinion. The movie just doesn´t make much sense.

~Auz, Review Request Club


ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review - I agree with what you said.


FattyWhaleFattyWhale

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

K

^^Good Points^^
The graphics were pretty smooth. Some cool FBF action and nice coloring of the different items throughout. Nice sound effects as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
A lack of storyline really hurt this. I just couldn't get interested in it just seeing a random ax fighting a line.

Review Request Club


ShortMonkey responds:

Thanks for the review! ^_^


CoopCoop

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Quick and violent

This a very fast paced flash. I quite like it, even though the axe blows weren't quite timed to the beat of the music, I still feel it worked well.

I'm not sure about the explosions at the end of the piece, as they just tended to be a little too numerous and also the detail just didn't feel right for me. Try zooming in, to give you greater control of the pen and you could make the flames look a little smaller.

Are you thinking of doing similar random flash at all, or is this it?

[Review Request Club]


ShortMonkey responds:

I'm making a sequel that I think is coming along well. :) Thanks for the great review!


ImacowImacow

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice flash

-Good-
I liked the graphics. The animated background was done nicely and the animation was smooth. The music was a good choice. I liked the intro with the (Short) Monkey.

-Bad-
The one thing that bothered me was that the axe only slashed verticly. Perhaps you could of added some horixontal attacks. Also, I didn't like the use of gradients on the explosion at the end.

-Overall-
A nice flash. I enjoyed it.

~Review Request Club~


ShortMonkey responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^_^

The explosion was actually made by me for a game thats in the making and when its smaller it looks better but I made it huge for the movie... But I hope I can get away with it for the game.

And as for slashing vertically I might try that, that would look really nice but it would take a while because its like a 3D ax if it slashes that way.

Thanks for the great review! :)


Darkfox13Darkfox13

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Sorry bro

Dude , i sorry to say that i see why this movie is going down in rating, it was to short and kinda boring.