Score: 6
"Marginally disappointing"
date: July 28, 2007
As always I enjoyed your voice and the kookiness of the plot.
I did find the blue text at the start a poor colour choice. If the character models in the crowd were dispersed more evenly, it might look more like a crowd. And there was a grammatical issue right at the start (should be 'not just being a lazy bastard').
While I'm picking faults, I would have liked more of a reaction when the accounts are deleted. Maybe the 3 characters disappear, just as their NGT aliases do. Or maybe they scream for a while. Then Wade chuckles and he or someone else tells them it was a joke. Or maybe they just have their accounts deleted, scream and everyone else laughs. I think you needed some release there.
I did enjoy it in parts. I chuckled watching A_S's reactions and also loved his redesign. Those were my favourite parts.
Not one of my faves of yours, but a fairly enjoyable watch. I liked seeing your cast and also seeing 'Fagamut' realised
This is my first review since the redesign by the way. Funny that you say you got tired of waiting. How long before the redesign was it submitted?
(I wasn't here for the launch, having a broken PC. :( )
July 29, 2007
Author's Response:
You're right. There should've been more to this plot as you suggested. Also, this flash was submitted a month and a half before the redesign came.
