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***Improved! I have now added voices to the story and touched up some of the graphics! I hope you enjoy!***
Well, here it is. My first animation that isn't a Scallies V Goths. This animation is quite short, basically, I wrote a short story, then when I got Flash, I decided to animate it.
Hope you like it. It took me an entire 12 days to make.
*STANDS AND SALUTES*
Kazakhstan greatest country in the world
all other countrys are run by little girls.
Kazakhstan number one exporter of potassium!
Other countries have inferior potassium.
Kazakhstan home of the tinshein swimming pool
it's length thirty metre ans width six metre.
Filtration system a marvel to behold it removes 80 percent of human solid waste.
A nice and simple animation featuring a country we all know, heh. Nice and simple, with a unique concept. Don't really know what else to say about this, just keep up the good work!
that was a nice animation. the intro for this one dragged on for quite a while i think, but once the actual animation got going, it was quite nice to watch and it was worth the 'wait'.
A little long-winded
The intro went on for too long, in my opinion.
You could do with learning to lipsynch, if your animation is essentially based around dialogue, and also improving the sound quality.
Push the FPS up a bit, and tidy up your drawing.
Alright... I guess
I had one problem with this. The US soldier, didn't sound... well, US like, and what I presume was an English soldier (Because he called the US soldier a Yankee.) didn't sound English like. Alright story mind you.
Things to improve on:-
Faster Frame rate or faster animation.
Mouths, do em properly.
Oh, and a tiny touch on the graphics and this would be fine
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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