Score: 10
"Not surprised, but still shocked."
date: June 1, 2007
I'm really happy with how much you've improved since you started! Very nicely done all around. I'll assess this the best that I can but what changes you still need to make are minor at best.
+I loved the easing of the motion--very smooth and very subtle.
++++I loved the fact that the mustache hairs moved as they spoke. Great attention to detail.
+Nice shadows and and lighting effects--I'm interested in how you pulled off your blurs with your version of flash.
? Are you characters purposely 2D? Seeing that I've never seen a side profile, I'm noticing a parappa the rapper trend with the way they move. It's a fine style in it's own right. I'm just honestly wondering.
+ Much longer than your usual animations--you pulled it off quite well. The scenes were well planned out and executed well. I liked the slight joke at the end too.
+/- Blood and guts? That surprised me--that's certainly a new way of animating them too. I've never tried it that way before and it gives me some ideas.
Peoples Court = Random
And I loved the monkey too--and the sneak in Su-Fi was a great add in.
The animation is nice all around, there's nothing that I could possibly point out anymore. You're really a great animator. Nothing more I can do but pat you on the back.