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My collab part for SPP Smoking Kills Collab.
I am apart of smoking collab but its ment to be 5 - 10 seconds so maybe you need to get rid of some frames
Very well done, im glad that you have decided to express your feelings on smoking in this flash in a way that may even appeal to the smokers out there, you had a good point and i for one enjoyed this. The only things i would add would be some sound and maybe a character design instead of just the stick man. Overall well done on expressing your view.
Yeah, somking kills
Well, with sounds it would be better, but I really liked the short text in the end...
that was pretty cool.
nice graphics but needs sound.
It really needs sound to go with it. I don't know wut you would put to it, maybe some lounge music or something and some talking.
Also was a little slow, maybe up the framerate?
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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