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Well this is my first Lockday. I didn't have much time to work on my Flash but that doesn't mean it is not good. ((I actually only had a day, but I'm pretty please with how well it came out))
Please watch the whole thing and vote fairly.
P.S. - The end is the best part.
Edit: I respond to all reviews... SO FRAKKING LEAVE 'EM!
why does everyone call him Ash Ketchup? OK, it is funnier.
ASH: I'm Ash Ketchup, and I'm going to be the best Pokemon trainer ever!
ASH: Choose your Pokemon!
ASH CHOSE FLAMING CHICKEN
POLAROID CHOSE HOWARD DEIN
FLAMING CHICKEN ATTACKS WITH YELL (lvl: wuss)
YELL DOES ABSOLOUTLY NO DMG.
HOWARD DEIN ATTACKS WITH FLAMING CHICKEN ELECTRIC KILLER (lvl: infinity)
THE ATTACK WAS SUPER EFFECTIVE! ENEMY FLAMING CHICKEN DIED
ASH: You killed my Flaming Chicken!
GODZILLA ATTACKED WITH STOMP (lvl: OMG!) GODZILLA WINS!
just a little something for anyone who wants the final scene in Pokemon video game format.
You know, for a Lock Legion flash, this is OK.
Most people are not a big fan of g/c/locks, I would not be a big fan myself, but this was pretty good, but very random. Sorry if this comment was totally pointless too you.
Very Well Done!
I love your animation style, and it was pretty amusing as well. I can't wait to see what kind of Flash you will come up with next, I hope you will give yourself more time also. :P
Review on your LD07 flash.
Graphics: Lock flash, don't care about graphics. 10/10
Style: Lock Day, and it is about something, dunno. 10/10
Sound: Liked the beginning, and then heard that these are REAL voices, not speakonia. 10/10
Violence: Well, not that much, and it would be 10/10 if Polaroid used a gun or knife instead to kill the other person. 7/10
Humor: It is funny, but can't get a 10/10 without CoffeeLock doing something. 9/10
Suggestions for next year: Dunno, more violence, humor, keep the real voices.
Overall: 9/10, this is very good for a Lock flash, and a NG flash. Good luck on your LD08 one.
Thanks a lot. This is pretty contructive, and yes I was thinking about having Polaroid kill Ash somehow... but godzilla was easier to do, somehow... i guess... whatever.
Haha thanks, and next time I will take my time.
Sailablestic w/ a side of toast (no jam...)
I really liked the opening and I was almost impressed by the idea of four random items living together. The inevitable antics would have been golden. But I felt… disappointed by Howard Den and Pokemon. Old American Politics and childhood fads are both bad tastes, like a bj and vodka, at the same time.
The animation was good, but of course you knew that.
Haha. Yes I did record all the audio and all the jokes and so forth for the "four random items living together" idea.
Then my perfectionism and randomism kicked in and I scratched it for a completely random idea...
And yes the animation was good... and I did know that...
A short film about a park bench
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