Score: 7
"Best left unsaid"
date: June 20, 2009
Well, it's a little short, but pretty nicely animated and I have to say that the imagery of the balls could have been worse - they could have had pubes and loads more wrinkles. Maybe that's just reading into the subject of 'balls' a little too much.
Still, it's a good gag and the whole set up was pretty decent. Perhaps the guy who was being told the story could do a few other bits and pieces - I've never seen anyone sit completely still in those sorts of situations before, so throw things in like some smoke on the cigarette, perhaps have the guy take a swig of his beer and maybe even do something with the game of cards that it looked like they were playing... In fact, were they playing cards? If not, that's always something for them to have been doing.
Try drawing it out a little longer, so that when the punchline hits, you get a better laugh.
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