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This is the second episode of Ytown Public. In the first episode Newton Nerd jumped out if the window and died. Now he's back! How?! Why?!
Find out now in this exciting episode of YTOWN PUBLIC!
like the plot i guess...
well it was a pretty good movie, but all take out the good parts about it and tell you what you could work on.
well i personally think it would be neat to go 3d sometime in there. thats just me. but about that sound, that nerd guy has the most annoying voice!! and i think you could take out your little commentary here and there. it doesn't add much effect. i'm sure the next one will be great. have fun with flash!
Oh I would love to add some cool 3D effects, but I don't have a clue how to do it. I use FLASH 5, will I need an extra file or something? Anyone knows how to do 3D? I take it you don't draw all the lines by hand. That would suck (I have tried that).
Ok, now I'll logg out and continue with the next episode (bursing with new inspiration).
Real funny (maybe improve your acting? ;-)
I know not everyone can voice-act good. Hey! if your original language is swedish and you can also write in french that's still impressive. Maybe a little more effort on plot development and you are on your way to NG stardom.
Hmmm. funny thing is my linguistic courses managed to help me pick 1 out of 4 words from your swedish compatriot's review (but never actually learned the language).
Thank you. I think I have improved the voice of Fred in episode 3. I had a cold when I recorded the 2:nd episode, so that's why he sounds like a... well... sounds a bit too pathetic. Yes, I do know how to write and speak French. It's hard. I'm working on #4 now! The plot is much more complicated than it seems in #3. I hope you still like it. Now see the rest...
Nice. It gets interresting. The animation was quite good. The sound quality however was horrid. Get a better mike and maybe some software to edit it. For 3D flash use Swift 3D 1.0. Its quite easy to learn. Won't take you more than a day or so, and all you need to do is import 3ds models into it, which you can download of the net for free. Lookin forward for the next episode!
Wow! Thanks man. I really wanted to know that. And the mic, I don't know why the sound sucks - I've an entire music studio connected with my computer. Well I guess I suck at talking. I'm just a silly Swede.
I hoestly dont know how to rate this. It was mostly just weird. I thought the audio needed a little help, other than that, this is like a demented episode of the Simpsons. nice job
what a movie!
Everything was great!!! The only think I can think for you to improve on is the voices... they seemed too squeeky.. sortof. There was a lot of breath tapping noises from the microphone, you might want to buy a better quality one. And the accent of the little girl/alien thing seemed to fade out (like the accent was strong at the begining but hardly recognisable at the end). Other than that it was an excellent movie!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!
Thanks. I will do more. As a matter of fact I'm making more right now!
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