Score: 3
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date: September 1, 2005
ok...
if it wasnt for the sub-titles, i would never have understood a single word they said! I thank you for putting subs in there.
and the bios of your characters are nice.
you need to fix the sound of your flash. it sux hard. and your dialogs are like... weird. i cant really explane it...
they talk too much about stuff, instead of moving on to the story.
for example, the part about the gay guy dieing from the last ep. they rant on about that, I got bored and stoped watching it from there. he died from last ep and came back. he's making up excuses using clones and stuff, we get it, dont have to rant on and explane any more.
well, it was an ok flash, drawinf is ok to look at... needs a little more flavor, sound, dialog and work on the evil laugh!
