Score: 1
"Short, Pointless, Low effort"
date: May 24, 2007
The movie was very very short, which of course leaves little room for plot. Next point, there was barely any plot and little point to this movie. The spelling that was shown in this flash video left alot of room for improvement and demonstrated that little effort was put into this flash video.
It would help alot if you had possibly written out a plot or did somewhat of a storyboard, and planned ahead. If the other episodes are of similar length, it would be much more interesting if you compiled all of them together, so the whole video would not be so short and seem more interesting as a whole, and perhaps the humor would build collectively.
Author's Response:
ur barely a plot
