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The Loch Ness Monster and a camera ready Scotsman.
Thanks for the responses! this was my first attempt at animation so i really wasn't expecting too much. I am really excited now to start on my next short. Thanks again, peace.
Very well done for your first animation.
This was a very well done animation. I really loved the art style and am looking forward to more of your work.
The only thing I really didn't like was the fart... I thought it kinda ruined the movie for me.
Other than that, I think it was very well animated.
thats some really good animation !
it was good
good animation but its slow and doesnt hold my attention well. it should feel like one solid scene rather than "this happens, then this happens, then this etc."
his points are still valid. these are reviews they are supposed to critique so he can better his work in the future. he may have presented it rudely but dont chew him out for pointing out flaws when it is essentually the point to do so. "why dont you start working with flash"? he doesnt need to. his role is the adience. and with a short project like this with out much else to it there isnt much else to critique besides the animation. that being said mcfuzzes rating was a bit harsh. who cares how basic the technique is, its how well he does it and for a first attempt this is actually pretty good. still needs work but you're pretty good.
Good art and the bitchslaps were enjoyable. Do work on the fluidness of your animation though (wasn't that bad either).
It's his first animation, and I haven't seen any first animation that was better then this. How about you go start working with flash instead of giving a 3 only for the animation? (if you DO start working with it, I bet you'll get some ugly, choppy, stick out of your work)
I must say I almost agree with Mr. Mcfuzz. But for the same reason he disliked it I quiet enjoyed it.
A short film about a park bench
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