Score: 6

"?!?!"

by: Caltoons

date: January 27, 2008

The file is too big for what it is... I think it's the song!

Score: 10

"coop83... dont lie."

by: Jakemet2

date: January 22, 2008

you could'nt make a better animation than the one who made this

so i dont agree with you.

10

Score: 2

"K"

by: milinko959

date: June 24, 2007

^^Good Points^^
I liked the sound effects, and the guy's crazy expression was pretty funny.

^^Needs Improving^^
I guess it provided what it promised, but that wasn't really much and I thought it was going to be quite a bit more. This was extremely short, and really too short for me to enjoy it too much.

Score: 1

"You're better than this."

by: Coop83

date: June 15, 2007

Well, this is far too short. The badly drawn guy, jumping off a badly drawn cliff, hitting the ground and turning into a badly drawn mess.

I'd advise you to use a smaller pointer, when you draw your figures. That and zoom in, to get more control and a better looking picture when you finish. Granted it takes longer to do, but it's well worth it in the end, as you'll have a much better finished product.

Give us some background into the character - why is he comitting suicide? Has he left a note? How will his relatives deal with it? If you establish a plot, you can add this (or a better version of this) into a final product, which would make the whole thing much more rounded and acceptable.

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Score: 1

"Noyhing more than a stick figure dieing."

by: TheBlueNeck

date: June 14, 2007

Graphics- The graphics were pretty poor they were just a stick figure and a badly drawn landscape.
Style- I didn't see a real style to just poorly drawn figures nothing original.
Sound- It sounded like a good song but it ended to quickly for me to tell.
Violence-The ending was fairly violent.
Interactivity- None
Humor-It's not funny to see someone randomly die.
Overall- It wasn't funny the graphics were poor and it was way to short. You really should put more effourt in your submissions.
1/5
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