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For my Economics class i had 2 make a commercial for beverage my team named stone cold and I wanted 2 get commentary from people out side my family and freinds
>Well, graphics weren't exactly amazing, but I have definitely witnessed some atrocities, and this wasn't one. The style and Humor gave this piece some points, but lost some for sound and graphics.
>Having said that, I loved it. Partly because the comedy was thought out, partly because its a spoof on some drink commercials, but mainly because I can actually see this turning into a commercial ad. All in all, not a bad job.
Sa'll right... I suppose
well this aint the best thing ever butttttt, for such a crappy product u did purdy gewd
Its fine... just fine...
I mean... i cant call it great neither... But I dont exactly hate it... Its just fine... average to be exact.
It's alright. Some slight spelling errors, no biggie.
The filesize is really big for such a short movie, and the first music doesn't seem to fit it very well, but I don't see any huge problems with it.
Hope this is the rough draft.
If this is for you economy class, I'd look it over. There's multiple grammar errors, hard-to-read text, and some innapropriate music. Plus, you don't need "Boy:" when we can see the person who is talking, and his mouth is moving. Overall, below par.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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